Exposure is Important

by Eva Neufeld

As students we should be able to mix our unique dialects and find out what variety of English we are most comfortable using. As Young states, “everybody mix the dialect they learn at home with whateva other dialect or language they learn afterwards.” I am going to discuss that if teachers dock off points for not using Standard English it could be seen as prejudice. The school system preaches diversity and inclusivity until some kids want to write the way they speak and then they get a big, fat F on a normal paper.

There are so many dialects and varieties of English used within schools today. One of the most popular is AAVE, African American Vernacular English, or Black English. In many schools, mine included, a popular novel that students read is “Their Eyes Were Watching God” by Zora Neale Hurston. This novel is written in AAVE and is a good way for students to be exposed to different dialects through literature. Teachers test students on this serious piece of literature, but then dock off points when black students use AAVE in a paper responding to the novel.  

I would have to agree with both Young and Fish and say there should be a good balance within the school system regarding instructing varieties of English. Students should be exposed to literature in a different dialect, but there most definitely should be a limit to the exposure. White students should not be allowed to appropriate different varieties of English such as AAVE. They should be exposed to them though. Reading literature with different dialects and learning the backgrounds and culture tied to each dialect should be implemented in the basic school curriculum. Then students that actively use these dialects should be able to use the way they speak to help their writing. That is not to say that standard English grammar should not be taught, but it should not be established as the only acceptable way to write and speak.

Everyone’s dialect is their own and teaching students to display their point most effectively while using their own dialect to achieve it should be every teacher’s priority. Who gets to decide what is academic in the school system? Since every dialect follows its own set of rules, every dialect should be seen as legitimate and should be graded by teachers as equal. The only exception to this would be if the student used a dialect opposite to the one specifically asked to be used or the one being instructed in class. 

Going back to every dialect being legitimate, Merriam Webster recently added AAVE terms “finna” and “chile” to the dictionary (Caldwell). For a teacher to take off points because a student used these words would be considered prejudice. On the other hand, if the student is taking a specific standard English grammar course, the teacher would have to dock the student if standard English was not used. There is a fine line between what could be seen as prejudice and what is not, since there isn’t any legislature in the school system that talks about the use of different dialects, such as AAVE, in assignments. Such legislation needs to be implemented.

In his article Fish states that “you’re not going to be able to change the world if you are not equipped with the tools that speak to its present condition. You don’t strike a blow against a power structure by making yourself vulnerable to its prejudice.” I can see why he would say this, but I disagree. If this statement were completely true it would mean that anyone that didn’t speak standard English couldn’t change the world and historically nothing would change. President Obama code-meshed quite often during his time as president. An article written by the Harvard Business Review mentions how even though code-switching was “crucial for his [Obama’s] professional advancement, code-switching often comes at a great psychological cost” (McCluney). Relating this to the school system, students could have a hard time switching between their dialects and standard English, which could create a strain on their learning and grades.

The school system needs to be more inclusive of dialects such as AAVE, since “like most language varieties, African American English exhibits inherent variability, encompassing a range from standard to vernacular (cf. Arthur Spears 2001), but stylizations most often make use of features associated with African American Vernacular English, filtered through hip hop and pop cultural representations of Blackness” (Smokoski). AAVE is used widely outside of the school setting by black individuals and even white individuals who appropriate and mock it. Therefore it is extremely important for school systems to properly educate and expose students on how to use whatever variety of English they are most comfortable with. 

 You might be asking yourself, “well why does this affect me?” or you might not even directly realize that you most likely code-mesh everyday. Regardless if you are consciously deciding too, code-switching is often present when you go from a professional to comfortable setting, school to home, or even just speaking with two different people. So why shouldn’t students be able to code-mesh in their writing? 

The article “And Still the Children Suffer: The Dilemma of Standard English, Social Justice, and Social Access” states that the main dilemma surrounding code-switching or code-meshing is how “the educational establishment including teachers, administrators, reading specialists, textbook manufacturers, and standards and test creators respond to vernacular speakers through a deficit lens, marking vernacular grammatical traits as errors” (Wheeler). This “deficit lens” creates a tense atmosphere where teachers are repressing their students’ creativity and freedom to write how they want. Being able to write how you speak, without fearing a lower grade, is vital to figuring out exactly what dialect you are most comfortable using. 

 

Works Cited

 

Caldwell, Brandon. “‘Finna,’ ‘Chile,’ & Other AAVE Terms Are Officially Words According To Webster’s Dictionary.” 97.9 The Box, 12 Mar. 2021, theboxhouston.com/10224514/finna-chile-officially-words-websters-dictionary.

 

Fish, Stanley. “What Should Colleges Teach?” New York Times, New York Times, 2009, opinionator.blogs.nytimes.com/2009/08/24/what-should-colleges-teach.

 

McCluney, Courtney. “The Costs of Code-Switching.” Harvard Business Review, 28 Jan. 2021, hbr.org/2019/11/the-costs-of-codeswitching.

 

Smokoski, Hanna L., “Voicing the Other: Mock AAVE on Social Media” (2016). CUNY Academic Works. https://academicworks.cuny.edu/gc_etds/708

 

Wheeler, Rebecca. “And Still the Children Suffer: The Dilemma of Standard English, Social Justice, and Social Access.” College of Charleston Libraries Off-Campus Access, Accessed 1 Nov. 2021.

 

Young, Vershawn Ashanti. “Should Writers Use They Own English?” Iowa Journal of Cultural Studies, vol. 12, no. 1, 2010. JSTOR, ir.uiowa.edu.

 

Rhetorical Situation Analysis- Eva Neufeld

Hillary Clinton’s speech as a rhetorical situation

The United States was forever changed June 10, 2016 when, at the time presidential democratic nominee, Hillary Clinton took the stage and spoke openly about reproductive justice.  Her memorable words left most of the country wondering what would happen once a new president was elected.  Rhetoric- or a rhetorical question- is meant to make a statement, not ask a real question, so when Clinton says, “do we want to put our health, our lives, our futures in Donald Trump’s hands” (Badanes)?  She isn’t actually asking the audience a question, she is making a powerful statement to try and convince people all over the United States to vote for her.  Clinton’s speech is so monumental since she is the first woman to be nominated for president.  Her rhetorical situation set the foundation for more female politicians to come out and talk about intense issues, such as reproductive justice.

 Lloyd Bitzer defines a rhetorical situation as “a natural context of persons, events, objects, relations, and an exigence which strongly invites utterance” (4).  Hillary Clinton’s reproductive rights speech responds to a rhetorical situation since a certain situation- the upcoming election- prompted her to speak for 26 minutes about an important social justice issue.  Every rhetorical situation must have exigence, an audience, and constraints.  The exigence consists of the reason the situation happens. It is what prompts rhetorical discourse.  The audience consists of only the people that can actually “do something” about the rhetorical situation.  The constraints consist of the rules and expectations that govern rhetorical discourse. 

   One of the several exigences in this rhetorical text is the fact that Clinton is running against a pro-life candidate, Donald Trump, in the 2016 presidential election.  Her speech is meant to address an urgent problem: Trump’s threat to reproductive rights.  When the situation is broken down though there could be a lot more.  Clinton’s essay consists of several exigences that structure the response, as Bitzer says, “in any rhetorical situation there will be at least one exigence which functions as the organizing principle: it specifies the audience to be addressed and the change to be effected”.  The exigence could also be Donald Trump’s views on reproductive rights or it could be simply promotional.  Since abortion rights are human rights and you would assume that citizens of country would want human rights, Hillary Clinton is using rhetoric to make herself seem like the ideal presidential candidate.  Clinton stresses the “idea that women should determine [their] own lives and futures” (Badanes). 

 While discussing the political efforts of reproductive justice as stated by Kimala Price, a writer for the Cambridge University Press, she says that “reproductive justice advocacy groups have attempted to queer reproductive justice by building coalitions and developing a shared agenda between the new movements.  The recent election of Donald Trump as the 45th president of the United States has presented a different set of challenges to this process” (581).  Funding for reproductive justice organizations has gone up due to the fact that a pro-lifer could be, and was, elected president.  As Clinton mentions in her speech about how “we’ve got to get to work.  Because as you know better than anyone, right now, across the country, rights that women should be able to take for granted are under attack” (Badanes).  This quote is a reference to the work that we, as Americans, are going to have to do to protect women’s rights.

   A claim is a statement where the writer conveys a belief or interpretation about something.  Clinton’s claim is that she would be the better president than opposing candidate  Donald Trump because she believes that abortion rights are human rights.  Her evidence to that claim is stating simple facts such as “anyone who wants to defund Planned Parenthood, and wipe out safe, legal abortion has no idea what’s best for women” (Badanes). The warrant, or what ties the claim and the evidence together, is the fact that she stood up in front of Planned Parenthood and gave a speech about reproductive rights.

  The audience is directly the Planned Parenthood Action Fund members, as seen when Clinton says, “I’m grateful to the entire Planned Parenthood family.  You made this campaign your own.  Whether you knocked on doors in Iowa or rallied in California, this victory belongs to all of you” (Badanes).  Technically though, the audience is also the entire nation since the speech was broadcasted to the citizens of the United States to help her presidential campaign.  The speech was broadcasted through newspapers, television, and the internet, so it was available to anyone with access.  The audience is rhetorical since Hillary is influencing them and trying to persuade them to vote for her in the upcoming election.  The audience is linked to one of the many exigencies- the outcome of the election.  The audience’s response is structured by the constraints, the same way that the response structures the constraints. For example, the audience’s response is formed by the manner in which Clinton talks about the abortion issue.

   Lastly the constraints are the speech time limit (she took 26 minutes), the tension between pro-life vs pro-choice americans, how the speech was communicated (via tv, radio, newspaper, internet), and by the way that she is supposed to act respectful and professional way since she is running against Donald Trump who is usually loud and aggressive.  The most “important” constraint that I noticed was how Clinton stayed professional and somewhat composed while she was talking about such a controversial issue.  She had to use a professional tone and use more mature vocabulary to remain how a presidential candidate should be.  While watching the speech and analyzing Clinton’s tone and body language, the emphasis she put on specific words and her forwardness truly helped her get her point across.  She often gestures to the audience, asking them rhetorical questions and making sure they know how intense the situation that she is talking about is.  She also uses jokes and light humor to lighten the tense mood.

 Openly stating that she supports Planned Parenthood puts Clinton exactly opposite from her competitor, which is as much as a good thing as a liability.  Voters that are pro-choice will see her rhetoric and be confident in their choice to make her president, while pro-life voters will be confident in their choice to vote for Donald Trump.  You could argue that the speech itself has a form of bias to it.  Clinton is speaking about reproductive justice to a room of people that work for, or donate to, an organization that centers around reproductive rights.  Even though the speech has the possibility of reaching every citizen of the United States, it is mainly directed towards pro-choice americans. 

 The ethos (credibility) would be the fact that Hillary Clinton is a woman and that she was the secretary of state so therefore has experience in political issues.  The pathos (emotion) would be the tense topic discussed and how it made the audience feel.  The logos (logic) would be Hillary choosing to discuss abortion knowing it would bring in a new pro-choice group of voters.  The three combine to create this ideal rhetorical triangle that aids in bringing forward effective communication.

What is discussed in this rhetorical situation is ongoing.  SB 8, a new abortion law in Texas outlawing almost all abortions, was recently a big topic of discussion in the news.  Luckily, U.S. District Court Judge Robert Pitman temporarily blocked the ruling (NPR).  This was a major relief to Texas women.  Clinton’s rhetorical situation led to many Americans asking themselves what values they want in their president and how, in the long run, these values will impact them.

Hillary Clinton’s speech on reproductive justice was effective- to an extent.  The speech helped inform Americans on the importance of protecting reproductive rights, yet it wasn’t enough to secure her presidency.  Most of her actions stood to oppose Trump’s actions, for example her speaking at a Planned Parenthood Fund while he spoke at the March for Life, this led to an interesting campaign dynamic.  Hillary Clinton “pledged to continue to call out anti-abortion politicians on their hateful rhetoric and stand up to the Congressional attacks on women’s health and rights” (Badanes).

Works cited

Badanes, Steffi. “Hillary Clinton Delivers Powerful Speech On Reproductive Justice to Planned Parenthood Action Fund Members.” Planned Parenthood Action Fund, 9 July 2019,www.plannedparenthoodaction.org/blog/hillary-clintons-speech-planned-parenthood-action-fund-members.

Bitzer. “College of Charleston Libraries Off-Campus Access.” The Rhetorical Situation, 1992, login.nuncio.cofc.edu/login?qurl=https://www.jstor.org%2fstable%2f40237697%3fseq%3d1#metadata_info_tab_content+s.

“Hillary Clinton’s Entire Planned Parenthood Speech.” YouTube, 10 June 2016, www.youtube.com/watch?v=D-5ZVHcm-2M.

“NPR Cookie Consent and Choices.” A U.S. Judge Blocks Enforcement of Texas’ Controversial New Abortion Law, 6 Oct. 2021, choice.npr.org/index.html?origin=https://www.npr.org/2021/10/06/1040221171/a-u-s-judge-blocks-enforcement-of-texas-controversial-new-abortion-law.

Orr, Gabby. “Trump Sets a New GOP Standard in the Abortion Fight.” POLITICO, 25 Jan. 2020, www.politico.com/news/2020/01/24/march-for-life-trump-abortion-speech-103994.

Price, Kimala. “Queering Reproductive Justice in the Trump Era: A Note on Political Intersectionality.” Politics & Gender, vol. 14, no. 4, 2018, pp. 581–601., doi:10.1017/S1743923X18000776.