Self-dependence in “Tea at the Palaz of Hoon”

In “Tea at the Palaz of Hoon,” Wallace Stevens uses the self and the mind as a point of stability in a world teeming with questions and uncertainty. The chaos of the post-war environment is left behind in favor of an exotic, Eastern setting, as is suggested in the title. As the poem begins, the speaker, clad in purple, descends through what is called “the loneliest air” and concludes that in spite of it all, “not less was I myself” (3). This theme of remaining intact and at peace as an individual despite a dark and cynical world spans throughout the poem. It is also notable that the “day” Stevens mentions in this stanza is characterized as a “western day,” referencing the ruin of Europe after the first World War.

The second and third stanzas present an interesting, internal structure of question and answer with the speaker. The speaker asks, “What was the ointment sprinkled on my beard?” in the second stanza and in the third answers, “Out of my mind the golden ointment rained.” This is seen again as he asks “What was the sea whose tide swept through me there?” and then answers himself, “I was myself the compass of that sea.” Here the speaker observes the state of the world and makes an effort to be master of it. Rather than feeling overcome by the tides sweeping himself out to sea, the speaker maintains he is himself the ruler of that sea.

This notion is expounded upon within the final stanza:

I was the world in which I walked, and what I saw
Or heard or felt came not but from myself;
And there I found myself more truly and more strange.

Again, the speaker is shown as feeling in power and control, rather than the sense of helplessness sometimes expressed in Modern poetry. Stevens is coming from a place of strength and inspiration, rather than a sense of defeat or detachment.

I think it is interesting that the world Stevens sees himself so in touch with isn’t the Western world. It is exotic and removed and almost mystical. So perhaps what’s being hinted at is that what can be felt at the “Palaz of Hoon” cannot be attained in the fallout of Western Europe at the time. Perhaps one is only really in control of the realm of one’s own mind. For Stevens, this power of imagination seems to be enough, and the vision of it he presents is certainly appealing.

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“The Snow Man” and The Surfer

I used “The Snow Man” by Wallace Stevens for my imitation poem. I wanted to capture the physical imagery that is present in his poems. I was curious to see if the winter imagery and its sense of isolation would parallel to a different season. Using Stevens’ original stylistic format I chose to emphasis summer and the beach to try and recreate his understanding of imagination and place.

The Surfer

You must have a mind of summer
To look on the shells and the sand
Or the ocean’s waves capped with foam,

And have been warm a while
To regard the crabs pinching with claws,
The pier weathered in the salty air

Of the summer day; and not to muse
On the misery of the wave of heat,
In the touch of grains of sand

Which is the touch of the land
full of the same heat
That is stifling in the same arid place. 

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Snow Day: Stevens’ Creative Strength and Unsettling Oddness

In “Tea at the Palaz of Hoon” (ANTH 247), Stevens uses imagination to go beyond the confines of reality and create a sort of “haven” within his own mind. However, it does not seem to be an escape from reality, but more a search for one’s self, a philosophical and spiritual adventure within the imagination to reach a greater sense of one’s inner being. The speaker states that he is “not less” (line 1) because of his inner wanderings, but in fact finds some power in the workings of the mind and the things that can be created. He finds agency through this exploration of imagination and its powers, stating that “I was myself the compass of that sea” (9). The speaker is able to control and manipulate everything within his own mind, from the “golden ointment” to the “blowing hymns” (7-8). He concludes with the essential point of the journey, the “finding” of one’s self, and the realization of the power of imaginative creation.

wallacestevensimaginationThere is, however, a sense of solitude and tension that undermines this revelation throughout the poem, expressing the possibility that all is not as it seems on the surface. For instance, this entire creative journey happens only within the speaker’s mind, and he never truly engages with reality. This could, perhaps, suggest a dependence on the imagination as a means of creativity, and a lack of interaction with reality, or even a disassociation with the real world. The speaker even concedes that others would consider such a deep mental exercise as “what you called / The loneliest air” (2-3), expressing the speaker as a loner, or one who is more comfortable in imaginary worlds than in the real one. On the other hand, throughout the poem he reaffirms that he is “not less” because of this, and seems to consider himself as stronger because he has such power of imagination and creation that others could not fathom.

At the end of the poem, however, the tension is revisited, when the speaker finds himself to be “more truly and more strange” (12). The strangeness of the line offers a hint of the earlier tension, and seems to both affirm and contradict the speaker’s final view of himself. He has reached a “truer” sense of who he is and what his mind is capable of, but the fact that he also finds himself to be “more strange” seems to suggest an oddness inherent within this solitary episode, that something is not entirely okay about delving so deeply into imagination and leaving reality behind. The speaker seems to feel both empowered and unsettled with himself, and it is difficult to understand whether his ingeniousness is something good or bad.

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Langston Hughes vs. The Harlem Renaissance, A Close Reading

Harlem RenaissanceThrough his poems, particularly “The Negro Speaks of Rivers” and “Dream Boogie,” Langston Hughes was attempting to communicate the truth about blackness. He was not interested in activism, but simply wished to convey art of, by, and for black people. His poems did not have to follow a particular rhyme, or meter, but simply communicate the sound of black people, in order to prove that it could be beautiful art, and that he was not ashamed of his blackness. While “The Negro Speaks of Rivers” did, in fact, challenge the notion that existed in the 1920’s that African Americans were lower on the evolutionary scale than other humans, the poems that Hughes wrote afterwards made it clear that activism was not his goal, due to his focus on the “low down folk.” Hughes was not interested in the uplift of black people, but instead wished to call attention to their beauty. His focus on blues music asserted his opinion that everything about the blues is a subject of art, while the architects of the Harlem Renaissance were trying to avoid perpetuating were being played in underground clubs surrounded by a supposed drug culture.the image of black people being a part of that “low culture,” including the blues, which were being played in underground clubs surrounded by a supposed drug culture.

In “The Negro Speaks of Rivers,” Hughes’ voice becomes a collective “I,” emblematic of all African Americans. He places black people far back into the beginnings of ancient civilization, giving them a prominent role, as much as any other people. He highlights their ancientness, wisdom, and resilience with his allusions to the building of the Egyptian Empire and the charged diction while speaking of his soul, which “has grown deep like the rivers” (4, 12). His use of repetition with this particular line adds emphasis to the concept of black people having wise and beautiful souls, and that they are as much connected to the Earth and to the history of the human population as any other people. The repetition of that collective “I:” “I bathed” (5), “I built” (6), “I looked” (7), “I heard” (8), joins together a string of impossible feats for one man to accomplish, further emphasizing that the “I” is representative of all African Americans throughout history.

Langston Hughes While the architects of the Harlem Renaissance adored “The Negro Speaks of Rivers,” they frowned upon poems such as “Dream Boogie” for perpetuating the “low culture” that blacks were a part of. Hughes uses improper grammar such as “Ain’t you heard” (2, 11), and “Y-e-a-h!” (21) in order to capture the true sounds of black people and the rhythm of their blues music. Like a blues song, “Dream Boogie” tends to sway in and out, swing back and forth, both physically on the page and audibly. In the second-to-last stanza, the quick, short end rhymes seem to mirror beats on a drum or cymbal, with swift exclamatory punctuation. There appears to be no firm structure to the poem at all, further reiterating his goal of simply communicating the sounds of black people, without maintaining some agenda of social uplift.

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Objectively Positive Poems by Wallace Stevens

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Peaceful Spot or Lonely Spot?

Two of Wallace Stevens poems written in 1921 titled The Snow Man and Tea at the Palaz Hoon successfully project a positively inward and reservist mood that rejected the generally accepted negative post war attitude.

In The Snow Man, the positivity develops out of the singularly based perception that creates Stevens beautiful winter wonderland of a world. The secret lies within individual mental adaptation to environmental changes. Steven’s suggests that, “One must have a mind of winter, to regard the frost and the boughs.” In order to experience the beauty of winter one must direct their attention away from the harsh sentiments that describe the coldest time of the year and instead direct it toward the peacefully tranquil and cleansing landscape that creates winter’s simple beauty. Stevens goes on to write about the January sun, stressing its value to be much more than “any misery in the sound of the wind.” The poem concludes with the image of the listener in the snow who “beholds nothing that is not there and nothing that is.” This seems to represent the objective lens the listener digests his world through, allowing the information to enter the listener’s mind without any predestined connotation.

In Tea at the Palaz of Hoon Stevens stresses a similar perceptual ideology that focuses on individual conscious choice and feeling. This is a radical portrayal of a self-centered outlook in which the world starts and ends with the self. Amongst “The loneliest air, not less was [he] [himself].” Despite the rest of the world feeling lonesome the speaker is content to be himself and that is enough. The two contrasting ideas here are the feeling of being lonely versus the feeling of being an individual. The different feeling that manifests inside someone is caused by the positive or negative perception toward the state of being alone. “[He] was [himself] the compass of that sea. In other words the speaker is the master of his own destiny, whose life starts and ends with him. He enjoys this freedom and feels most true with this state of mind. This challenges the post war feeling of individuals feeling helpless and demoralized from the hardship of war, feelings exposed in Elliot’s and Pounds pieces from the same time.

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Snow Day in the Tropics: A Close read of McKay’s “The Tropics in New York”

Claude McCkay’s poem The Tropics in New York uses the sonnet form to tell the feelings of nostalgia the speaker has for what he feels is normality, a feeling of home. McKay was born in Jamaica and lived there until his early twenties. Mckay can probably be seen as the speaker in this poem and it most probably tells of McKay’s experience of homesickness.

The first stanza of the sonnet has a light tone that is describing the tropical fruits in a market, presumably, because of the title, in New York. These fruits, “Bananas ripe and green, and ginger-root / Cocoa in pods and alligator pear, / and tangerines and mangoes and grape fruit,” are neutral and colorful images that almost produce a sense of longing in the form tantalizing fruits (ll. 1-3).

The second stanza visits the memories of the speaker which take the reader to a land with “fruit-trees laden by low-singing rills, / And dewy dawns, mystical blue skies” (ll. 6-8). The perfect sonnet form breaks here with the fifth and seventh lines not rhyming. Whether a comment on difference between the place the speaker is discussing and where he is now is up for debate.

The third stanza, true to its sonnet form, shifts in tone from one of slight longing and nostalgia to one of complete homesickness and then sorrow. The last stanza follows:

My eyes grew dim, and I could no more gaze;

A wave of longing though my body swept,

And, hungry for the old, familiar ways,

I turned aside and bowed my head and wept. (ll. 11-14)

The speaker is now announcing his longing for something or someplace openly. Using the word hungry stays true to the previous fruit imagery in the first stanza and the reader feels the speakers homesickness and by the last line sorrow at his feelings of being an outsider in the new society, which is New York. I believe this poem would resonate with the feelings of many immigrants forced or not to leave their home countries, even if in pursuit of a better life. Claude McKay does an excellent job of presenting this to the reader and his shift from positive imagery to negative emotions is very effective.

The Tropics in New York can be found on page 502 of our Anthology.

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A Veil of White: Claude McKay’s “The White City”

In the poem “The White City”(ANTH 503), Claude McKay uses contrast imagery and the sonnet form to express his steadfast hatred of the white man and segregation, as well as emphasizing his love of the city itself despite its associations with this overwhelming “whiteness.” The sonnet form, as we have seen with earlier Claude McKay poems, seems to be used in an ironic or sarcastic sense, expressing the speaker as someone versed in the more classic intellectual forms of poetry. McKay was, in fact, well-acquainted with such forms, despite his poor background and the stereotypes of his race. He implements this form of the Shakespearean sonnet to provide contrast between what is shown on the outside and what is true on the inside, as he does throughout his poem. Most people expect a sonnet to be about love, but instead McKay uses it to express his “life-long hate” (line 3) and “dark Passion” (6) in contrast with the city around him. Throughout, McKay uses the contrasting colors of black and white to display both his hatred and the illusory nature of the white world. claudemckaywhitecity NewYorkMist

The speaker’s hatred is constantly expressed as something powerful and unfaltering, as well as something that must be hidden from view, “Deep in the secret chambers of [his] heart” (2). The speaker takes strength from his hatred, a passion that “forever [feeds him] vital blood” (8), stating that he will not “bend an inch” (1) under the forces that attempt to oppress him. However, he hides this hatred from the outside world, once again expressing the contrast between the things we see on the outside and what we feel on the inside. Everything in the poem is hidden by something; the speaker’s hate is hidden inside his mind and heart, the “dark Passion” fills and is hidden within the “shell” of the previous line, and the city is shrouded by mist. Secrecy and illusion seems to cover the darkness within both the city and the speaker, hiding it beneath a veil of white.

The constant element of juxtaposition in the poem plays an even greater role in the imagery surrounding the city itself, contrasting the white mist with the speaker’s passion, heaven with hell, light with darkness, and noble love with secretive hate. Despite the fact that the mist, which covers every inch of the city in a blanket of whiteness, attempts even to engulf the speaker and his “heaven” (7), he resists it and “bear[s] it nobly” (4) by pretending to be content and inhabiting the disguise, covering his own self in “whiteness” and forever gratified by the passion that helps him survive, either the “heaven” found within in the confines of Harlem, or his sense of personal pride and power.

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Linking Sculpture and Poetry: Mina Loy’s Beautiful tribute to Brancusi

Mina Loy’s Brancusi’s Golden Bird is a beautifully written, and abstract, poem that describes the art of “Costantin Brancusi…[a] pioneer of abstract sculpture” (Loy 273). Brancusi was French, although born in Romania, and was renowned for his modernist bird statues which became a symbol of the artistic movement at the time (Loy 273). Reading Mina Loy’s poem gives the reader the feeling of look at an abstract sculpture; her lack of punctuation and use of extreme enjambment personify the experience of enjoying one of Brancusi’s sculptures and of its creation. Although lacking punctuation aside from the odd dash Loy does capitalize the first letter of every stanza except for stanza five. This indicates that each stanza, except for five, can stand alone as one complete sentence or thought.

     From the start, Loy uses interesting line breaks in her poem: “The toy / become the aesthetic archtype / As if” (ll. 1-3 Loy 273). The reader is already has some feel for the poem from the title, but Loy’s quick shifts in line length pull the reader in as if you are hooked and your eyes are pulled down the page. Loy continues:

Some patient peasant God

had rubbed and rubbed

the Alpha and Omega

of Form

into a lump of metal (ll. 4-8 Loy 273).  

     Here, Loy first introduces the sculptures rather abstractly; conjuring images of a God –particularly a Grecco-Roman god because of her mention of the Alpha and Omega. Loy even mentions the word form in the first stanza; this refers to both the sculpture and her poem. At this point, without the title, a reader could have an image of what Loy is describing, but this image would be rather distorted and variable.

     In the third stanza Loy begins using bird imagery, with words and phrases such as: “unwinged unplumed [sic]”, “of crest and claw”, and “the nucleus of flight” (ll. 9-15 Loy 273). This abstract imagery may conjure the image of birds or flight in some readers.

     Stanzas four and five describe the raw power and effect of the art on its viewers and possibly the sculptures themselves. Loy uses assonance and alliteration beautifully throughout these stanzas and uses dashes in line twenty to emphasize the line, “–bare as the brow of Osiris– ”(l. 20 Loy 273). I read this line as a description of the power of the abstract sculptures and art in general. Stanza five is the only stanza that does not hold its own as a complete thought or sentence but is rather a continuation of stanza four. It uses fire or light imagery to create a kind of brightness for a moment in the poem. Loy uses words such as “incandescent”, “flames”, and “reflections” to achieve this (ll. 22-24 Loy 273).

     The sixth stanza is equally abstract, discussing the light in stanza five as somehow affecting the sculptures and art in their creation. Loy sees this light as a significant part of the creation of a statue.

     Stanza seven is where the sculpture is born:

The immaculate

Conception

Of the inaudible bird

Occurs

in gorgeous reticence … (ll. 31-35 Loy 273).

     Here, I believe, Loy is describing Brancusi’s finishing of one of his bird statues. It seems fairly evident with the mentioning of Immaculate Conception. The last line of the poem, “in gorgeous reticence”, beautifully refers to the sculpture’s pureness because of its immaculate conception. Enjambment is used throughout the poem so the reader stumbles down the page, this adds to the abstract feel of the poem.

     I very much enjoy this poem and believe Mina Loy did a wonderful job of describing both the sculptures and their creation in a way that is true to the abstract nature of the art. This is modernist art and poetry coupled at its very best.

Loy, Mina. “Mina Loy.” The Norton Anthology of Modern and Contemporary Poetry, 3rd      Edition: Volume 1, Modern Poetry. Vol. 1. S.l.: Norton, W.W., and, 2003. 273. Print.

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New Beginnings

T. S. Eliot’s poem “Gerontion” is filled with negative imagery of death and decay beginning with the title. Gerontion, according to the book, translates to “little old man;” the word “little” representing frailty and decay of the old body and the word “old” alluding to the nearing of death. Already the reader is able to sense the bleak tone of the poem from the title. The speaker of the poem is depressed at growing old and this depression is distributed onto the world around him. The way he describes scenes is a reflection of the way he sees himself.

In the first stanza of the poem the speaker described his position in relation to others, emphasizing age, “Here I am, an old man in a dry month, / Being read to by a boy, waiting for rain” (lines1-2). In these lines the speaker indirectly compares himself to the boy reading to him. He describes the month he is in as dry because he is old and decaying, while the boy is waiting on rain, still a depressing image but associated with youth because the boy probably wants to play in the rain. Here the rain can also symbolize an ending, signifying a new beginning. In that sense the boy is waiting for the sunshine after the rain while the old man is in a dry month.

Further on, the speaker describes a women doing housework and again creates this old_man_study_by_pur1n-d5kh912gloomy image of himself in comparison, “I an old man, / A dull head among windy spaces” (15-16). The woman is described in action as she completes tasks in the previous lines of the poem, while the old man is still in his description, unmoving as those around him are in constant motion. This is symbolic of life and death: the woman being life and he, death.

There are constantly gloomy images as the speaker describes his life—or lack of—in a negative way. At one point there is hope, in stanza six the speaker says, “The tiger springs in the new year (49). This is a vibrant image of life and a new beginning; the tiger represents life and power while the new year is a new beginning. But the speaker quickly slips back into a desolate tone as he completes the line by saying, “Us he devours. Think at last… / (49). He immediately follows this image of life with an image of gruesome death. This reflects the speaker’s negative feeling towards death. Instead of seeing it as a new beginning he sees it as a final ending.  At the end of stanza six the speaker lists his loses:

                        I have lost my passion: why should I need to keep it

                        Since what is kept must be adulterated?

                        I have lost my sight, smell, hearing, taste, and touch:

                        How should I use them for your closer contact? (58-61)

The speaker addresses a lover in these lines as he mourns the lost of his youthful qualities. This idea of decay is emphasized when the speaker describes the absence of all five of his senses and his decaying passion. This entire poem focuses on loss, decay and death of the speaker. He describes him self and everything related to him in a deteriorating manner. The speaker sees death as a lost and this idea is emphasized throughout the poem.

 

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Snow Day: Close Read on Eliot’s Wasteland

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T.S. Eliot

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The Wasteland

During the 1920s T.S. Eliot was noted as one of the greatest poets. At this time he just published his, The Waste Land, which is a known as one of the most important and influential poems in the nineteenth century. T.S. Eliot was born on September 26, 1888 in St. Louis. He attended both Harvard and Oxford and got literary inspirations from his peers in Harvard. From then on he got a job at Lloyd’s Bank which lasted until 1925 when he joined a publishing firm by Faber and Gwyer. In 1929 the firm changed it’s name to Faber and Faber and Eliot was then announced as the director of the firm. Then in 1948 he won a Nobel Prize for “his outstanding, pioneer contribution to to present day poetry.”
The Waste Land is a very allusive and intricate poem that can be interpreted in many ways. A lot of this work was completed with the help of Ezra Pound who helped polished Eliot’s final work. According to Shmoop the subject of this poem is the decline of western culture and the beauty that this culture once possessed. In lines 62-63 in the Norton Anthology he writes:
“A crowd flowed over London Bridge, so man,
I had not thought death had undone so many.”
Eliot makes reference to this in the Norton Anthology that he was referring to Dante, “At the gate of Hell, Dante describes souls in limbo as “‘So long a train of people/ That I should never have believed/ That death had undone so many.’ They are limbo because they “lived without praise or blame” or did not know the faith.”
So he talks about the Lost Generation and the Western Decline and although the world may never be what Eliot may have thought it would turn out to be he still is right about the Lost Generation.

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