I think peer-editing went very well yesterday. I read Caleb and Cameron’s papers and both were interesting topics. I particularly liked Cameron’s topic “Learning to Think” discussing the ways we think, are taught, learn, and why. Both papers are off to a great start! Peer editing really helped me and I’m thankful for the opportunity to revise our rough draft before it’s graded. I have some grammar mistakes that the boys picked up on. Caleb posed two great questions to me that I want to incorporate in my paper: my opinions on what grades should uniforms be for? Am I implying that everyone should wear a uniform. Also to relate uniforms to C of C. Personally I believe that uniforms should be enforced in lower, middle, and high school– I’m not 100% certain about the high school tho. I think college is a time to find yourself and truely develop your idenity/ what you want to do with your life. I don’t believe uniforms should be instituted in colleges (other then sports teams, organizations, etc) and worn to class each day. I am interested to see how my paper turns out. Right now its 13 pages- I have too much info and probably should concise some of my arguments/ opposing evidence. I often explain topics too much that can be summarized.
Have a great weekend everyone!